This e-portfolio shows my learning & what I have achieved
Monday, 6 June 2011
My writing progress
My goal is to get to level 4 of the new Zealand curriculum.I have chosen this goal because I are making progress towards being abel to write a level 4 peace of writing.
Your report starts of very well with an excellent general statement that hooks the reader in and you have begun to describe the damage to the CBD. Your next learning step is to describe in more detail and to finish your report off with a conceding statement.
Your report starts of very well with an excellent general statement that hooks the reader in and you have begun to describe the damage to the CBD. Your next learning step is to describe in more detail and to finish your report off with a conceding statement.
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